Monday, July 15, 2013

Apple Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometime i think
if there was no apple
creation would not be completed
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ramesh rai
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Unwritten Soul 27 July 2017

I m not sure the apple that Adam and Eve ate is the same one we have nowadays...i think its different, but as i take nothing serious to not understand the beauty of your thoughts, i mean your idea is brillant voyaging time to time from past to future, and how apple subject keep making history maybe you can add, an apple a day keep doctor away (we used to hear this) .... and Apple is influential technology company now, what will be in the future...so i think you are clever by picking this thought to be served on this table...of observation and poetry...i just yum yum!

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 July 2013

Wonderful write....if there was no apple......Good poem...Thanks for sharing...

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R.j. Wynn 22 July 2013

It's a grand write to behold.

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Rekha Mandagere 21 July 2013

You have much more than the nutrition value here hahaha. It is witty. I could dream about lovely apples of India by being in America. Thanks friend: -)

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Anamika Jalan 19 July 2013

yeah, i deal with it everyday a thought provoking poem rather a lovely truth

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Tribhawan Kaul 19 July 2013

A nice analogy on apple. Creation of mankind has always been a subject of deep research. For me an apple a day keeps a doctor away. So far as poem is concerned, It is beautifully written in your own style.

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Valerie Dohren 16 July 2013

If Eve had not eaten the apple, symbolically speaking, man would have remained in a state of ignorance and undeveloped consciousness - as you say, creation would not be completed. Good poem Ramesh.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 July 2013

if there was no apple Hard to imagine the consequences. Thought provoking poem. Thank you.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 16 July 2013

A beautiful poem on apple, also referred as king of all fruits. so many histories are written and compared to this fruit. truly an excellent write.

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Raj Arumugam 16 July 2013

a good poem on this amazing fruit, Ramesh

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Shahzia Batool 16 July 2013

wonderful poem, kindly visit my page for the sequel of this poem i wrote after reading your poem...thanks! ! !

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