Friday, January 29, 2010

Apple Comments

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Nature naughty
Sitting on the tree
Pulled an apple
An’ threw it down
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Raj Arumugam 06 April 2010

clear lines that illustrate the nature of the partnership between the creative/inventive mind and nature

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Ratnaprabha Raykar 21 February 2010

such original thinking, hats off to you

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Miriam Maia Padua 12 February 2010

great... satirical piece... amusing...thoughts' provoking... apple..the legend of original sin the fruit of knowledge... from tilling the land to high technology nowadays... very nice idea....brilliant thoughts....as always... 10+++ Snow

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Sandra Fowler 12 February 2010

Excellent satire and quite amusing. as well. We are helpless against nature and all of its mysterious ways.10+, Always your friend, Sandra

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Sonya Florentino 10 February 2010

seems the apple plays a significant role in our lives...from Adam and Eve to Newton.....

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Sadiqullah Khan 10 February 2010

I had commented here Kesav, any ways, I wish Newton had been sleeping at that time.

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Sandra Martyres 08 February 2010

A super simple way to teach the laws of gravity.....great write Kesav

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Bob Blackwell 07 February 2010

Interesting and read with a smile, as I am sure it was written. However I am puzzled as I always thought it was gravity that put the Buddah in my pants.

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Tara Chettur 07 February 2010

Nature is always naughty, you are precise in this usage a very nice one 10 foe its simplicity

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Mamta Agarwal 06 February 2010

Natutre naughty- you are right, it conspires to teach valuable lessons. you have driven your point home by drawing on an historical event every one is familiar with. nature is amazing in its simplicity as Emily Dickinson wrote. thanks Mamta

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Eyan Desir 06 February 2010

Written by an intelligent man

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Chitra - 05 February 2010

'The Crazy Gravity'..a nice poetic tribute!

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Indira Renganathan 05 February 2010

The meditating Philosophy! ....only this makes the reader puzzle first...but soon cleared....a nice attept of innovation at the invention....thank you

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Catrina Heart 03 February 2010

Interesting poetic lines yet scientific one as law of gravity stated...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 February 2010

lovely sir...when i started i thought it may be adam...finally it turned out the crazy gravity...10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 January 2010

hmmmm.... interesting write you made here

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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