Thursday, December 7, 2006

Appetite Comments

Rating: 4.7

He has an appetite
sweet to satisfy.
But he's so distant and curt,
with painful goodbyes.
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Delilah Miller
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Marvin Brato 29 April 2008

This one I can send to my wife! Another 10.

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Preeti - is here! 19 June 2007

Try, try, try, till you find him! i like how you've written this one!

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fanniesson - 15 March 2007

For me I realize a poem is good if my wife could read it then use it against me really nice write here

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Lee Degnan 19 December 2006

Very thoughtful write... keep searching for the one that does both. Lee

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Delilah Miller

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