Saturday, January 12, 2019

Appetite For My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like an iceberg on the sea
Revealing fewer and hiding further

Like the beautiful crescent moon
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 19 July 2020

WOW so well thought. Inside my body beneath skin Under hard bones And flexible muscles My Heart beats the drums

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 January 2019

Beautiful crescent moon shines through spark of galaxy. Like diamond this shines. The pearl within the shells we witness and feel deep philosophy. Both love and light we feel in this universe. A poem that has deep insight is interestingly penned....10

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Tom Allport 13 January 2019

A wonderful write of the emotions that are felt when in love? .......well written.

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Valsa George 13 January 2019

Love is a strong emotion which cannot be fully expressed or exposed! Sometimes the tip of the iceberg alone is seen above the water and much of it is hidden under. In the same way love also remains hidden deep beneath and its full extent may not be understood by others. From the poem I understand that now there is a burning passion in you for someone who has conquered your heart ! A beautiful poem on the magnitude of love! Asim, a 10

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 January 2019

PS: I am adding this poem to my poem list.

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 January 2019

Your love poems are soothing to read, they are real imaginative with a touch of reality and like a hidden treasure they explode time and again giving birth to new ways. Your appetite for love poems are enduring and limitless.100++

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