Tuesday, November 25, 2014

Appetite Comments

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Appetite
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You are what you eat
And driven by appetite
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Akhtar Jawad 02 December 2014

A poem on an unique topic but Deepak has beautifully managed it and wrote an impressive poem for his readers.........10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2014

Comparison of consuming food is excellent.Many thanks.

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Valsa George 25 November 2014

Relishing good food is everyone's pleasure.... But there are many ways of approaching food! Some eat just to satisfy their hunger... Some relish each morsel and consume it with grace and in moderation! Some are so gluttoness that with the alacrity of a lion pouncing upon its prey, attack food as if they have been starving for days..... Some eat to excess, never caring for what their body can afford to have.... some make a mess of it! This is a very interesting poem and unique in its treatment of the topic! Enjoyed!

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Valsa George 25 November 2014

Relishing good food is everyone's pleasure.... But there are many ways of approaching food! Some eat just to satisfy their hunger... Some relish each morsel and consume it with grace and in moderation! Some are so gluttoness that with the alacrity of a lion pouncing upon its prey, attack food as if they have been starving for days..... Some eat to excess, never caring for what their body can afford to have.... some make a mess of it! This is a very interesting poem and unique in its treatment of the topic! Enjoyed!

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