Monday, October 24, 2016

Appear And Disappear Comments

Rating: 3.5

When it was time for sun to appear,
The moon disappears.
When it was time for moon to appear,
The sun disappears.
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VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM
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Anjandev Roy 07 November 2019

Fabulous write. Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Akhtar Jawad 31 October 2016

When anger or sorrow is appeared, The happiness is disappeared. When boldness is appeared, The fear is disappeared...................Nice thoughts very well penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2016

This is wonderful happening everyday in nature. Sun comes and moon disappears. But still moon depends for light on sun. During anger and sorrow, happiness disappears and goes far. This magic we have to understand. Very thoughtful poem is shared with wise perception.10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 October 2016

This means nothing is still.Everything is on the move. That is the way of life.! Dear Ram! Well expressed through the imagery of sun, moon, fire, water, anger and sorrow. Beautiiful poem! 10++ for you

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 27 October 2016

Beautifully expressed..... You are invited to read my poems...

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Mubeen Sadhika 26 October 2016

Simple and poignant display.

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Mubeen Sadhika 26 October 2016

Simple but poignant display.

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