Appeal To Love. Comments

You have taken the words out of my mouth Fay! ' please read my poem 'Beautilful love' i have never asked anyone to read my poems but i want you to read this one

alas reapproachment is difficult and you wisely suggest that you will be first, clusters of emotions of warm tenderness, how could the counter point refuse 10

Hi Fay, very touching and intensely personal. I dare anyone to write with such honesty and sincerity: it is there in the expression, the tone and the evident longing and belonging. Whose song was it: 'Never let the sun go down, the two of us still fighting'? Never a truer phrase... The 'I've had enough of the wanting to win' line is so poignant. RW Emerson said, that for a friend one would need 1000 years to enjoy each other: how much more for a lover and a soulmate. Is eternity going to be long enough, I wonder. Whatever you believe about 'life, the universe and everything' as Douglas Adams put it, may you be graced by all the time you need together: especially if you can write some more like this one! Thanks, Tony

Hi Fay. A fine piece of writing that flows well all the way through to a hopefully happy conclusion. a great read thanks. Regards Dave T.10/10

Love makes us act in foolish ways, but whats Important is never part angry, kiss and make up at the end of the day, you love each other anyway... Andrew 10