Friday, September 21, 2012

Apparition Comments

Rating: 4.9

Last night I had a dream.
In my dream,
I saw a beautiful lady
Who everyone wish to love.
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Alon Calinao Dy
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Shania K. Younce 06 November 2012

How very interesting. It t'was of a pretty silence.

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Louis Cecile 01 October 2012

I like the way this poem is structured and the sense that something is going to happen at the end. The sudden ending works well. Very well done

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Allemagne Roßmann 01 October 2012

Apparatuses having the muse of their own sounds and poetic phenomena...very deep and allusive write and top marks hereby

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Alon Calinao Dy

Alon Calinao Dy

Samar, Philippines
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