Apparition Comments

i'm honoured, my friend...the irony is i'm absolutely non-musical!

It is almost like a song

A well written poem, my friend. A pleasure to read. Thanks Richard

Well written and straight from the heart in a style that is yours alone!

You have spoken like only you can, hope to hear more, so we can drink of the fountain of your poetry. Dreamgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

Clever combination of styles. Intriguing read.............................

Let's supplicate so that the good things of the world will be next to us to illuminate our ways.

ahh that's so beautiful that's amazing great work

On a whole its nice. Liked the way it is laid. And the style of changing formats. nice work.

Colourful rhythmic write, I enjoyed reading it, thanks 10 Lynda xx

I like the blending of styles - it certainly adds colour and music to the poem...10

i believe the quartet says it all, along with the mother, father, children, and maidens all rejoicing in this love. gr8t write

A many faceted poem which every time presents somthing new. A message of love and optimism.

Great poem, but I believe the eighth stanza or paragraphed section down might need a little more polishing. Like to the 'When ever it should Happen' should be changed to happen. God bless us all-MJG.

Definitely a sense of musicality in your work. Nice write!

wow thts is a amazing peom ever gd job 10+ i luv when u keep writing o its so cool

very impressive dear that was such a wonderful poem. i enjoyed reading it a lot thanks for sharing.10

Biblically and poetically penned tradition of 'Stop and Smell The Roses' with the addition of the challenges, additional wisdomettes, and a meter of song

Wonderful poem! ! , I like your mentioning to the feelings and the function of alot of things like: forests, maidens, children....etc.Keep it up....Merna

You remind us that there are so many beautiful things for us to enjoy and that we should not stop looking around us and opening our eyes tasting all the colors and pleasures that others bring our way. The world is full of music.