Apology (You Deserve It) Comments

I too like the satire and wit in this one. It does describe much of the so-called poetry on this site. Thankfully a good one like this pops up now and then. Read mine – Indebted – Adeline

Haha! I love it. Satire and wit at its best, sir poet. While no lover of chopped up prose when it claims to be poetry, I too can enjoy a good piece of writing. Kindest regards, Irene

LOL! ! I just love the sorry'ness of this piece... TENaciously Xtreme me thinkest! !

My mid is suddenly taken back to an English Teacher's words in high school..... I think therefore I write, I write therfore I think.. A deep piece indeed

Modern free style writing is exactly as you describe chopped up prose in the main I have read some beautiful pieces but they are not poetry/They do not understand the difference between poetry and prose or between good prose and rambling thoughts Ivor