Thursday, December 8, 2016

Apology To Nona … [ As Directed, Sort Of, By My Mate, Nona's Mom; Medium Length] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yes, maybe make this into a poem. Maybe it will be fun?
Nona, your mom keeps saying ‘Apologize. You're the one
….who should be responsible to do it. You are OLD! '.
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Bri Edwards
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Annette Aitken 18 December 2016

Bri I can just picture that whole convo going on and you digging your heels in, and the mom....but it did make me chuckle a bit lol

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 15 December 2016

You seem to be over-obsessed with rhyming. You are gifted with a sense of humour and that is enough for us readers. You seem to realize your penchant for rhyming - I can see that from your dilemma between pled and plead! And, the titles of your poems speak of long historical references, which I can't understand. Here is my (10) for the humour that you so merrily sprinkle at PH. Please remain humorous and make us tickle our ribs.

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Kim Barney 08 December 2016

Does Nona ever read your poetry? Will she ever see the apology posted here on Poem Hunter? Since apparently you aren't allowed to speak to her!

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Bri Edwards 10 December 2016

well, .............normally i NEVER Reply to comments, except [and i ALWAYS do this] to send a responsive message directly to the commenter. but, i'll do the former this time, AND the latter later! i don't know if Nona ever visits PH, but i once put one of HER poems (with her assent) into my poem list. it is a favorable poem about me as a stepfather. NO, i did not write it. she did! so, now i wait to see if she acknowledges my poem, and HOW she responds, if she does. then, maybe i'll tell her mom. bri :)

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