Friday, January 18, 2008

Apology For Empathy Comments

Rating: 4.3

How shall I apologize for such, my indiscretions?
Overwhelmed as I often find myself
accomplice to my imperfections
Yes, I confess
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Mary Havran
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Robin Pitt 07 February 2008

I'm not all that great at leaving comments but this one I can see within myself as something I myself have been through so to that I say thank you for putting into words what so many have tried and failed at before.

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Alto Thomas Jr 02 February 2008

competent and confident... also touching.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 26 January 2008

Dear Mary, Whispers from your heart and so lovely...! You made me smile and there is joy in giving... Dorothy

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Empath In Flames 26 January 2008

For some reason I can really relate to this piece. But i'm just not sure how.... lol Great write Mary.

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Muriel Emerson 25 January 2008

i love this poem its great expression of self and trust me no apologies needed

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I think many of your readers will find reading this like looking in the mirror (except of course that you pen it better) .... and no apologies needed. t x

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Duncan Wyllie 21 January 2008

Dear Mary When we are acting out of kindness and from the heart, No apology is needed fortrying to be at our best Do good for others and do not drag yourself down for it, not for a moment Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 20 January 2008

Compassion penned with compassion and gentle irony. Your love of language is strongly evident in your work. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Theresa Moore 20 January 2008

No apology needed when you are true to you heart. Well written.

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Shannon Wright 20 January 2008

a delight to read. -shannon

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Vijay Gupta 19 January 2008

very good poem.thanks............

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Ian Bowen 18 January 2008

Mary, what a great piece of writing this is. Loved every line. Ian

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