Thursday, October 10, 2013

Apologizing Love... Comments

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Father and mother
Sister and brother
Son and daughter
Can you remember, great god father...
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sisirachandra vaduge
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Roseann Shawiak 21 October 2013

I understand what the poem is about, but the lines are not altogether clear. A rewrite I think would help clarify what you're trying to say about apologizing love. Would like to read it again after rewrite if that's okay with you. Keep writing because your ideas are well founded. RoseAnn

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