I understand what the poem is about, but the lines are not altogether clear. A rewrite I think would help
clarify what you're trying to say about apologizing love. Would like to read it again after rewrite if that's
okay with you. Keep writing because your ideas are well founded. RoseAnn
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I understand what the poem is about, but the lines are not altogether clear. A rewrite I think would help clarify what you're trying to say about apologizing love. Would like to read it again after rewrite if that's okay with you. Keep writing because your ideas are well founded. RoseAnn