Thursday, November 13, 2008

Apologize Comments

Rating: 4.5

I sit here by the window
Watching the rain fall down,
From a gray cloud directly above me
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Jamie Walker
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I love t he language. hreat though from a young heart..

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A good poem about personal responsibility. It takes a 'big' person to apolgize. Keep Writing.

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Javier Falcon 13 November 2008

There are a few errors which can be fixed, but over all its a very good poem... I like how its expressed... Congratz...

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Jamie Walker

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