Tuesday, May 15, 2018

Apologies My Community Comments

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Be hold, my son

Thou status does not grant
Noble community membership.
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Lungelo S. Mbuyazi
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2018

'What society demands' is well inscribed in this poem. More over you have inscribed...... Look at me. I'm locked. Yet, I had had it all. I quenched the best of thirsty of fame. Now, I'm disgraced for I killed a man When I drove while I was drunken A beautiful poem having touching expression with a lesson of life has been shared startlingly.10

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Thanks again for sharing your thoughts about this poem...be blessed

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Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

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