Be hold, my son.
Thou coins does not grant
A mannered citizen membership.
I know what the nation requires:
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Insightful lines, well conceived and elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing bro.
I thank u dear poet for adding positive feedback on my work....A work of an intricate mind...much appreciated...
What the nation requires: .......the requirement of citizens has been astutely inscribed by you dear Lungelo with nice penmanship. It is a brilliant poem in your pen. Thank u.
Home to shalter your loved ones, So they feel your tender loving care; love, warmth, , married love, children, family, home.. so many concepts in such a small poem.. thank u dear poet. tony
Thanks you, Dr. Tony. I appreciate your effort in reading my poem.
Very special lessons taught in this amazing poem...10 plus
Your positive feedback on this poem is very much appreciated. Thanks Simon