Apollo's Quill Comments

Beautiful pen. Madam you are versatile poet; can write on any subject. The alliterations and rhymes in this poem are exceptionally good.

I read the whole poem but from the beginning, I knew it was great. THe title itself I find clever and the body is brilliant.

Great title wonderful last line simple sutle lines make this a luvli poem I think the indian writers have a command of english better than the english themselves including yourself ++++10 regards

hi indira you had me going crazy...its so well done....amazing write i am taking this to my favs and will give you ten and cheers congrats...wish u would add some detail in your bio cheers

very interesting and introspective! dear, friend. if time permits. please, read and comment on my seven new poems. thank you very much. Adieu Crevasse (page 4) Arrow of Death (page 5) Fatamorgana Fatale (page 8) Gratitude In Solitude (page 9) Last Prayer (page 11) Nostalgia (page 13) Vision Embroidery (page 18)

I always invoke Ma Swasarwati, Ganesh Vidapati, Jupiter & Apollo's Quill, before undertaking any major composition! 10+ -Raj Nandy (ONLY when you get some free time, do read my history of TROY -on page 3, sl no.44. Thanks!)