Apokalupto19 Comments

I like this........it's written in a hard edge kind of style. I hope I'm not insulting you when I say it reminds me of Bukowski. A dark humor undercurrent Your talking about sacrifice and the effort you've put into living and waiting for a payoff and after all the limbs are removed the cosmic answer is rather anticlimactic. Good one!

You need to look closer at how to express yourself and also watch your spelling. Best to write in your word program and run spell check before posting. Keep on trying.