Thursday, March 30, 2006

Apocolypse Comments

Rating: 4.0

The end is near.
Chaos guardians have been set free.
Pandemonium breaks out.
One's pulse beats ever so fast.
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~ Jon London ~ 01 June 2008

excellently written poem.........outstanding imagery..this has to be the most explosive line.......The gods have abandoned the earth. Humanity is on it's own now. Amazing talent...........*10* best wishes Jon

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Carl Peckett 13 April 2006

very good i like alot!

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Veronika Knollman 11 April 2006

Good poem.

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Peter A. Crowther 09 April 2006

I like the staccato rhythm of this poem. It's good

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