Thursday, December 31, 2015

Apocalypse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Satan's minions run and hide
The land swallowed up, oceans on fire,
The four horsemen of the apocalypse ride
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Ayman Parray
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Nosheen Irfan 06 February 2016

Wow. Splendid work. Accurate picture painted here with poetic depth n sensibility.10

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Ayman Parray 14 March 2016

Thanks my dear friend, Nosheen.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 January 2016

In God's Kingdom there is no pain. Until then, while on earth, there is either no justice or a delayed justice. Good and virtuous people suffer the most as they are constantly tested by God. But to remain patient and tolerant and again rise with hope, in spite of suffering, is the grit and determination that man must possess but so arduous to attain. A deep analysis of man and his sufferings, so well portrayed through Apocalyse! Most beautifully thought and penned with lovely image! Perfect and Complete Vote!

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Ayman Parray 04 January 2016

Thanks, Geetaji. I will always remember your wise words.

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Kelly Kurt 31 December 2015

I too see a dearth of love and justice on this planet, but upon scrutiny, I can see it among the ever present ills. Look for the bad and you will find it, however the same holds true for the good.

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Ayman Parray 01 January 2016

My dear friend Kelly, I agree but is that is a trick statement/question etc? ? ? lol I am flattered.Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 December 2015

Of love, hope, faith, justice there is a dearth Conquest, Very wisely penned and interesting presentation attract the attention of readers. Thoughtful poem shared with wise motive. Nice.10

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Ayman Parray 01 January 2016

Thanks, my dear friend. You were able to understand my motives.

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