Friday, February 10, 2012

Aphrodite On The Red Sea...1002-2k12 Comments

Rating: 5.0

(Warning: unsuitable for those not interested in long winding Homeric themes. But a warm welcome to those that know her well… :) …besides its valentine time… ;) …)

It was so much by design!
The sea azure the day so fine.
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Passionate Reader 02 July 2013

A pleasurable read! ! ! It's extremely impressive and no doubt beautifully written. You have not missed a single detail and the whole description has a picturesque quality with interesting textures! ! ! Truly beautiful :) Regards

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Yasmin Khan 18 February 2013

An amazing poem written in veneration of celestial Aphrodite. Lucidity of thought and flow of expressions make it a nice read. 'The rainbows shall rise and gently bend, as if to paradise and skies a message send.' These I've picked as my favourite.

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Unwritten Soul 20 February 2012

Artistry of imagery in poetry! ...wow read this very long..and i found this line at the beginning The sea azure the day so fine..Azure scenery is everywhere hahahaha :) I guess if we scan this poem under MRI we will see the great structure of layers you put in this work..lovely write Sat..._Unwritten Soul

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Wahab Abdul 13 February 2012

what a poem it is! 1 i not only like it but also love it, an epic poem of modern time with day today lexicon, thumps up! my respected poet.

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Shahzia Batool 10 February 2012

i read the WHOLE poem....in a single sitting u know...n this time i was expecting Homeric lexicon...but amazingly it was composed in an unexpectedly easy diction(within my reach :) i ENJOYED it aesthetically, , , , maza aya! ! ! a casement of myth, , , a myth that is modernized n simplified ...the attic aura relished n relived....i loved the end........but you know you looked like the priest of aphro..... going to dedicate this piece to all the worldwide followers n devotees of cupid n aphrodite on their day....14th feb... :) regards

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