Aphrodite And Li Bai Comments

another great poem. Good job

This is wonderful poetry, the phrasing the metaphors are perfect. Thank you Bob

i like these lines: - 'Bare bosom you entered my dream (no, it’s not a dream, I said) Aphrodite then you pull me up to dance with, young for ever, vertical and horizontal; in the end you award me a price, the fragrant juice of your beauty, to get me drunk on your other table. ' -so brilliant....as writer

Never! never! have i related to to words such as yours! ` you have grabbed, taken, enslaved my being

You write so beautiful, you have a great talent with words. This poem is lovely. Hugs, Donna

thickly knitted descriptive poem...wonderfully crafted...very very good poetry indeed.

nicely written, and what dreams you must have, I bet they are just terrific, you express them very well keep up the great work. Harry

you're great! i have so much to learn with you!

Yes it's got that classical touch...

it's like reading a classical poet...you are one, indeed!