Friday, November 5, 2021

Apathy Comments

Rating: 4.2

I'm sick of being awake
Gotta keep going for Mom's sake
Sit on the porch and have a smoke
Just wish I'd go ahead and croak
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Jessica Stubbs
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David Wood 29 November 2021

The heart is where we can make graves fir our sadness, bi the heart is where new life, and new love is born. Excellent poignant poem.

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Chinedu Dike 28 November 2021

A poignant bit of a verse, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched....

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Jose Gonzalez 27 November 2021

This one is too negative. Life is all about your state of mind.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 November 2021

Deeply poignant. A well expressed poem.

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Brook Renwick 27 November 2021

Your poem is well written but you have a lot on your plate atm it seems. I hope your life improves and you keep writing : )

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