Monday, September 1, 2008

Apathetic Way To Be Comments

Rating: 5.0

I need no direction
no, I can live this part
with no place for love
in a apathetic heart
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Nae Tyler
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Thomas Kurkoski 25 September 2008

Very nice....a free form writing that abounds with truths that most people these days (both young and) must feel...my kind of writing...

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Leslie Briggs 01 September 2008

The line that really caught me was 'a wistful sigh'. It showed the true meaning to apathetic feelings. Wonderful work.

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