Tuesday, May 24, 2016

Apart-Ment Hunting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who knows the hours
Of evening showers
And drying flowers
From a lover, sent
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Susan Lacovara
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Theodora Onken 07 June 2016

Susan, perfect use of metaphor; Understand all too well, the empty sorrow that a broken relationship brings! Feel all of your emotions and feel for you! Love your poetry.

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Kishore Kumar Das 24 May 2016

Susan, your stylish poetry describes the means of intruding your lover's heart through the language of apartment......beautiful conception......10 marks to you..

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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