Sunday, August 17, 2008

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As frothy waves embrace the seashore
And garland it with seashells and pebbles
Under the starlit raven sky,
I feel to embrace my love
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Buddhi Hatharaliyadda
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C. P. Sharma 28 December 2008

And walk with her holding hand in hand to the ever approaching eternity I am with her in mind and soul But alas! in body I am alone. A sublime love craving for the deep dip into the universal soul. Your poem weaves a superb imagery very well carried till the end withperfect flow and rhythm. It is classic. Love, CP

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Very lovely.I gave your poems tens.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

A nice poem, bravo. Wel done.

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