Thursday, September 24, 2020

Anywhere, But With You Comments

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I'd rather be anywhere but here with you
Though it'll leave me in a state of blue
But I need to do it for my own good
The moments we were together were the best times
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Alexie Whitman
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Quoth Theraven 25 October 2020

Alexie, I read your poem 'Anywhere, But With You'. Aptly described the healing from the heartache. Your words flow with a nice poise. Once bitten, twice shy...the moral perhaps? QtR

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