Anywhere But Here Comments

I love this Derek, as I've said to many poets in the past, everything changes, nothing stays the same. Good poem.---Melvina--

rhyming couplets always make a poem sound forced - abandon them and you have better lexical choices available. Nice sentiments though

Desperately awesome. Love the poem. thumbs up. *wish you could make your poems a bit longer...*

Hello Derek, .....Your poem feels sad and alone, yet very nicely wrote. With Respect, Jodilee