Thursday, November 26, 2009

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The lights they shine bright
A piercing bright white
Everything else is so lit up by its essence
What would we do without its presence
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Robbie Squires
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Kassiah Gervaise 25 December 2009

you should write a book...you really are a beautiful writer i loved this one.

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Very descriptive. I really like your similes, they really put in image in my head as I read it.

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Robbie Squires

Robbie Squires

Akron, Ohio
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