Thursday, December 4, 2008

Anything Comments

Rating: 2.9

She ran out of the mist and into his arms
Hid from the hurt and out of the harm

I’d do anything babe
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Amy
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yea, i liked how you ended that, awesome.

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Scott Austin 18 December 2008

This is a wonderful piece that keeps the reader reading until the end…shocking…enjoyed the read. Scott

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Ency Bearis 17 December 2008

Anything unpredictable in any sense..a various aspect can happen..a depict between like and dislike write.... well expressed thoughts... Ency Bearis

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Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2008

Amy's 'anything'...could be anything...many could guess...but only by end... this write brings out well the inside tussle for love and hate...well done, Amy...10

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Raindreamer Hippy 13 December 2008

Really touching. nice repition

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Little Hatila ;) 12 December 2008

sometimes doing anything for someone you love is not enough... very well done, keep going pretty girl....10 Hataw

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Aijaz Asif 10 December 2008

nice write with good repeatation to make readers to stay with the poem and in the end a twist....thanks 10++ for this courageous write rgds asif

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