Friday, November 2, 2012

Anyone Out There? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Anyone out there? ....
I'd like to know...
Because no one's here.
I'm all alone.
...
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Cleo Blue
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Brianna Winebarger 29 November 2012

Like the flow of it...it is pretty good. Nut I think you need to work a lil hard to express your feelings. IT is a great poem, just needs more emotion. Great job

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