Wednesday, November 22, 2017

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If I die, who will care?
If I just step off of this chair?
Rope hangs down, I'm at my end.
I no longer wish to pretend.
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Bella Myles
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2017

Suicide is painful and this is very thought provoking poem shared here. Sharing secret is amazing. Thoughts grow faster. Brilliant poem is shared here.10

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Gajanan Mishra 22 November 2017

I no longer wish to pretend, good one

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Lea- Beima Dorestin 22 November 2017

Such a mournful piece of art I hope these words were imagined and not a reality, because if they're real then my dear you're wrong. It may sound cliché but you have a purpose to fulfill and you can't accomplish that if you're in your grave, so don't try to get there before time. You just have to find that purpose or create one. Your diction is impeccable, sense of life is remarkable! Keep at it! ! 💯💯👏👏👏

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The Crow 22 November 2017

Goodbye. It's a shame, to lose another rhymer. 10

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Bella Myles

Bella Myles

St. Louis, MO
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