Hi Tara - There is anote of dipair in this poem - but it does reflect what happens in real life.. V 1 A note of dispair - what went wrong? V 2 We all have dreams but life lets us down - and treats us unkindly. V 3 Poses a question - Do others acctually gain form our downfall or is it destiny? V 4 It is a fact of life - when others treat us badly - they don't but in the end we do. This is a well structured poem with a salutary message. I score it a 10 for structure and content. Yours - JOHN.
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Hi Tara - There is anote of dipair in this poem - but it does reflect what happens in real life.. V 1 A note of dispair - what went wrong? V 2 We all have dreams but life lets us down - and treats us unkindly. V 3 Poses a question - Do others acctually gain form our downfall or is it destiny? V 4 It is a fact of life - when others treat us badly - they don't but in the end we do. This is a well structured poem with a salutary message. I score it a 10 for structure and content. Yours - JOHN.