Sunday, November 26, 2017

Any Heart's Winter Comments

Rating: 4.0

Lost in, Time
Not knowing where to go
Past, Prime and Present,
Seem so long ago.
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Sandra Feldman
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Jette Blackstone 26 November 2017

Your use of commas slowed down my read- I believe your intention. You warp and ripple conceptions of past and present and prime. I believe this poem is about growing older and the opportunities for love that that were passed by or lost. While memories rebound/resurface, that love cannot be captured ever again. A wistful, but beautiful bit of writing. Very well done! :)

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 26 November 2017

Obviously memories drown in a person and acts wild when you try express.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 November 2017

In my poem's list and...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 November 2017

A beautifully crafted write.It expresses in detail the sadness felt in one's heart.

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