Any Heart's Winter Comments

Your use of commas slowed down my read- I believe your intention. You warp and ripple conceptions of past and present and prime. I believe this poem is about growing older and the opportunities for love that that were passed by or lost. While memories rebound/resurface, that love cannot be captured ever again. A wistful, but beautiful bit of writing. Very well done! :)

Obviously memories drown in a person and acts wild when you try express.

In my poem's list and...10

A beautifully crafted write.It expresses in detail the sadness felt in one's heart.