Anxious Comments

You paint a very clear picture of fear and anticipation driven by love. Finely woven poetic words, though the penultimate line seems to imply change or reveal something different about the writer or her intent! jim

Ahh, beautiful but a sad picture painted here. This person need to know how you feel, who knows maybe they too feel the same way. Someone has to take the first step, what have you to lose, a true friendship never dies. Excellent poem----Melvina--

I have that alot where I am so excited for something to happen. I get nervous and excited at the same time.