Anxiety Of Young Love Comments
With the birds chirping ever so softly in that afternoon sunshine
And the streets buzzing with cars going zoom zoom
The crescendo hit peak and went dead silent
When you suddenly appeared
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love..yes i found it in this poem, its full of it. this poem is great..thank you..(' v') V
great piece; you capture the essence of young love I could see that young man blushing :) 10/10
awesome work David it really does deserve a ten, I was enthralled.
I love this poem. You really captured the essence of Young Love. I definitely agree with Ms. Nivedita Truly ~Arimoko Konshei
Emotion in exuberance… ‘Went to bed with just one thought/I want to see you again and again’ ~ Who can resist such appeal…seductive alluring…all elements are elementally enticing…pure vibe … thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
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7/29/2025 5:36:37 PM # 1.0.0
Hi David, Your poem is very well written. Rich with detail and visuals ^.^ It's relatable and I love how I can really paint a picture in my head as a I read :)