Wednesday, May 25, 2016

Anxiety Comments

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Do to all her nerves
Thoughts cut the oxygen to her brain
The pain brought tears like pouring rain
Her hands shook faster than her heart could beat
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Melissa L Tamayo
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Seamus O Brian 07 September 2016

Her hands shook faster than her heart could beat There, she swallows the pain again I could feel the tension in every line. I enjoyed reading your work this morning. Thank you again :)

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Melissa L Tamayo

Melissa L Tamayo

Bronx, NY
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