Thursday, April 30, 2009

Anxiety Comments

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I’m not feeling myself today
Lie in bed, motives decay
The blood work always shows up fine
Yet the weight still declines
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Sugar Bear
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Elbert Matt Loubser 30 April 2009

the rythm of the poem dictates the message it entails, it is well written and well recieved

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 30 April 2009

very profound and expressive..brilliant poem

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rago rago 30 April 2009

A good write................

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