Saturday, June 18, 2022

Anxiety Comments

Rating: 5.0

The healer sat down to make an elixir,
It was bitter.
How could it be sweet?
The balance between the misery n happiness-
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Asavri Dhillon
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Part. They say TIME is an efficient healer. Reading these lines, I felt, you were talking about Time, the Healer! Top score

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Beautiful poem. A totally different look at the hard ways of life. " The balance between the misery n happiness- The healer focused on the misery." Great message

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Chinedu Dike 19 June 2022

Deep, insightful rendition written with conviction. A beautiful creation

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Richard Wlodarski 19 June 2022

Nothing better than meditation, and hypnosis, to assist in successfully resolving anxiety issues. Always under the supervision of qualified professionals. issues!

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Nabakishore Dash 19 June 2022

focus on sadness, elixir would be bitter and reverse it, elixir would be definitely sweet dear poetess.Beautifully crafted.

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Asavri Dhillon

Asavri Dhillon

Chandigarh, India
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