Wednesday, December 31, 2008

# Anticipation-Haikus Comments

Rating: 2.9

A new born awaits
In anticipation
For mother's breast...
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Mamta Agarwal
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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

A marvelous work on anticipation. 10 with pleasure.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 January 2009

A great ending to a poem that starts simply and runs smoothly, as matter of fact. I like this kind of ending, something that strikes to our heart.

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C T Heart 07 January 2009

Watching His creation in anticipation: God sends compassion... ----- beautiful haiku poem especially the last stanza, said it well...Wish i could construct this kind of haiku for i adore the uniqueness of its form.10++++

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Raj Nandy 05 January 2009

Yes Madam, the last line is very relevant, ' God's compassion'! Without which our very life will become too heavy a burden to bear! My medical book on Homeopathy, describes how at times this sense of anticipation gets converted into anxiety syndrome in some cases - leading to digestive & allied problems, - when Argent Nit comes to rescue! A NICE THOUGHTFUL POEM: 10! -Raj Nandy

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 December 2008

Happy new year Mamta, Anticipation is the best part.. Andrew 10

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Jay P. Narain 31 December 2008

Mamata ji, It's a nice work. Anticipation is what keeps are dreams alive.

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