Friday, January 1, 2010

' Anticipation Comments

Rating: 2.7

I hold within my trembling hand
This gift
So rare, so contraband -
I dare not take it lightly, 'though
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Linda Ori
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Inductive and beautiful. Well done my friend!

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 11 January 2010

wonderful poem ma'am. eloquent and nicely expressed. loved it. thank you.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 09 January 2010

Great poem and you got the Master key!

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Jake Shelvey 02 January 2010

Indeed! When I get a present I get so excited sometimes my mum looks worried..Brilliant poem, very well constructed

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Danny H 01 January 2010

Very clever metaphor to opening a present the key to a heart maybe. I love te giddy and joy displayed oh so cute and i know this feeling!

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Linda Ori

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