I hold within my trembling hand
This gift
So rare, so contraband -
I dare not take it lightly, 'though
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wonderful poem ma'am. eloquent and nicely expressed. loved it. thank you.
Indeed! When I get a present I get so excited sometimes my mum looks worried..Brilliant poem, very well constructed
Very clever metaphor to opening a present the key to a heart maybe. I love te giddy and joy displayed oh so cute and i know this feeling!
Inductive and beautiful. Well done my friend!