Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Anticipation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here enduring a wait, and weight,
Ready to start before time I wait,
Each sound outside multiplies a wait,
Longing my love has become weight,
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Howard Kern
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Hoping a reply I still must wait, I've learned the burn of wait and weight, I wait ridding weight..... it is beetr to wait till it comes. it is hoe that keeps u waiting n live.......10 rad mine hopes against hope

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the sweetness of a painful wait one day will have that sweetest taste, , written deeply and kept the reader anticipate the end and the speeding rate of the wait while the poet carry in his soul.on his shoulder a heavy weight..excellent

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Vinod Kumar 16 April 2009

To hold the weight and wait it is only the weight, but we put the weight in the waiting, it gives the asset of weightless wait otherwise it was a waste of wait,10++

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Howard Kern

Howard Kern

port Arthur, Texas
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