Sunday, August 17, 2008

Anticipation Comments

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The days seem long,
The nights feel lonesome,
I live in the anticipation,
That you will be back in my life soon.
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Jay P Narain
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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 September 2008

Ammmmmazing poem! I liked it.....thanks

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Anjali Sinha 31 August 2008

Sir, You have displayed very touching verses of love I like these: 'What I am missing is not the wealth or pleasure, But your love and undivided attention, I want to hold your hands and put my head on your shoulders, Just being with you makes my life worth living for.' regards anjali '

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
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