Tuesday, May 8, 2007

Anti-War Poem: Tony O' Blair - A Prophesy In Octosyllabic Rhyme Written Before The Iraq War Started - In The Style Of Tam O Shanter By Robert Burns Comments

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When peace protestors tak the street
And westerners Iraqi's meet
While we sit gaukin at the telly
And lining beer in oor belly
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Paddy Scott Hogg
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Philip Housiaux 19 March 2008

Very strong writing with the discipline of the tetrameter and couplets throughout yet articulating clearly the message. The points you made before the invasion and blair's personality have proven correct. Keep writing.

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