Anti-Valentine Comments

Every poet living with someone for any length of time has this one in them just waiting for the muses to ok it yours has good timing nice one

Good stuff, Ted... I really like the changing aspect of the relationship and the two different points of view. Brilliantly composed! Brian

Ok...I now think that my comments on the last poem were correct...but I'm always open to clarification. Nicely penned...with just the right amount of restraint, to not sound too angry. Good luck to you. Hugs, Dee