Thursday, June 28, 2018

Antagonists Comments

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As
Strong
Winds blow
Across window
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Doris Cornago
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Kostas Lagos 30 June 2018

Words are flowing beautifully in this poem.Thanks Doris!

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Doris 30 June 2018

This is a discordant poem, but yes, there's a loving give and take for reconciliation. Thank you, Kostas,

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Doris 29 June 2018

Anakin is a character in Star Wars who was in conflict with his father Darth Vader. Real life conflicts are reflected sym, bolically by movies, art imitating life. Or is it the other way around?

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Doris 29 June 2018

Two points of argument are the crowd he mixes with and the influence of friends on him. Never compare circumstances as he is a man and his survival are dependent on his own methods, sword and all.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2018

You have presented here a brilliant poem on love and life astutely. The theme of the poem is great and shape of it is beautiful to look at. Nice work.

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Doris Cornago 28 June 2018

All heated discussions should end next morning at the breakfast table, with waffles drizzled with maple syrup.

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