Sunday, September 11, 2011

Antagonist Comments

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I watch you swallow the rain.
You like the taste of suffering,
Your heart beats for spilt blood.
Arms spread apart, face to the sky.
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Stefanie Fontker
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Declan O Reilly 13 September 2011

My word, you really have such a way with words. This draws me in, it's imagery is striking and so thought provoking. To me it is for a fallen dictator.

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Ben Burger 11 September 2011

I love this poem, this is one of my favorite poems from you. It is beautifully written. Keep it up, I like your style of writting

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

Self-protaganism.Agony though some people do not have multiple choice questions to answer in life...

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Unwritten Soul 11 September 2011

Oh...You always writing with something inside to share, i like the way you end the poem...it's good like always :) _Unwritten Soul

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