Antagonism Comments
It all started with a single blow,
Between two rivals, and your homes.
It tragedy to watch whether you're a crow,
Or a pile of stones.
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Not just the single blow, But a new era of antagonism. Merges into the depths from long ago, To illuminate in the sight of realism.- - - - so true dear poet...... your obseervation.... is true......... our hatred, war, catastrophy, sufferings, death, bombing............ all for what...........we destroy the humanity......... thank you dear poet for your great thoughts.. tony
I think you get theme here, and yes that what am I looking for. It mostly about war is pointless, and see the horrors of war. Thank you so much, Brian.
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7/26/2025 10:12:13 PM # 1.0.0
A refined poetic imagination, Brian V. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
I already did it long ago when you commented on my poem, Magnificent Woman. This comment look kind of similar to the one just commented.But anyways, thank you so much for your positive criticism.