Monday, March 5, 2018

Antagonism Comments

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It all started with a single blow,
Between two rivals, and your homes.
It tragedy to watch whether you're a crow,
Or a pile of stones.
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Brian V. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Brian Varino 10 March 2018

I already did it long ago when you commented on my poem, Magnificent Woman. This comment look kind of similar to the one just commented.But anyways, thank you so much for your positive criticism.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 March 2018

Not just the single blow, But a new era of antagonism. Merges into the depths from long ago, To illuminate in the sight of realism.- - - - so true dear poet...... your obseervation.... is true......... our hatred, war, catastrophy, sufferings, death, bombing............ all for what...........we destroy the humanity......... thank you dear poet for your great thoughts.. tony

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Brian Varino 10 March 2018

I think you get theme here, and yes that what am I looking for. It mostly about war is pointless, and see the horrors of war. Thank you so much, Brian.

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