Wednesday, March 21, 2007

'Ant'Enna Dance Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm sitting here at home
trying to write a simple poem
I'm staring at the floor
Not knowing whats in store
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JoAnn McGrath
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Harindhar Reddy 21 April 2020

Yes it’s sweet and cute poem with minute observations on the tiny being, hats off

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Amanda Lukas 06 April 2007

Cute poem, JoJo. It had me thinking about the trails of ants in my first apartment. I swear they must have been a mile long! In through the winow and around half the room, then out through the door - like they pride themselves in making ant-designs on my walls!

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David Harris 04 April 2007

JoJo, nice title, cute poem, skillfully written. I just loved it. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Chuck Audette 02 April 2007

Ha, cute one! Now get out those ant traps, Spring is here, and here they come again... -chuck

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 March 2007

Great poem here... JoJo... I Look forward with ANTicipation your next poem...10

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David Taylor 27 March 2007

Tickling ant what it used to be. Stand in line for ant'tenner tickle...!

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Marci Made 21 March 2007

interesting concept, means of communication here...........also, you must have really good vision.........ah yes, I remember it well, it was before my arms seemed shorter...............I do not like bugs at all, but this is cute poem...marci. :)

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Alison Smith 21 March 2007

Maybe we should learn to use this type of communication... seems we dont listen with our ears.... nice poem Alison

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