Monday, February 24, 2014

Ant Comments

Rating: 5.0

Scurrying, hurrying, shiny and black
A tiny head and a longer back.
Scuttling along the garden wall
Right on the edge but you don’t fall.
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Dean Bottomley
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Karen Sinclair 12 March 2014

I really enjoyed this as it started off with an easy rhyme but it had so much depth added by the second stanza. I believe it relates to us as humans too. I wish I could give a more thorough analysis but if I try to review too long I just get chucked out. It's infuriating. Lol. I phone. Grrr buy on laptop no such issues. Stay here its a really good site. I think I've learnt so much here.

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